Valeria, this is one of the strongest responses to the assignment. The relationship between image and sound in several scenes works very well. For a short work with a very defined subject it is very satisfying, has a good "shape" though it ends abruptly. What was your intention with the end, the last shot?
You have shown an exceptional work ethic in this course. You've also tackled a variety of media with success. Keep up the good work.
Carol,when I edited the ending I thought that I wanted to conclude with the plant on the center image, however when I saw the whole video with that ending I felt that it needed again to come back to the tree. I know it makes most of the people feel uncomfortable because, as you said, it's abrupt, but don't you think that new ideas are always not well accepted? In other words new ideas are unexpected. Maybe I was trying to take some kind of risk without success.
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Valeria, this is one of the strongest responses to the assignment. The relationship between image and sound in several scenes works very well. For a short work with a very defined subject it is very satisfying, has a good "shape" though it ends abruptly. What was your intention with the end, the last shot?
ReplyDeleteYou have shown an exceptional work ethic in this course. You've also tackled a variety of media with success. Keep up the good work.
Carol,when I edited the ending I thought that I wanted to conclude with the plant on the center image, however when I saw the whole video with that ending I felt that it needed again to come back to the tree. I know it makes most of the people feel uncomfortable because, as you said, it's abrupt, but don't you think that new ideas are always not well accepted? In other words new ideas are unexpected. Maybe I was trying to take some kind of risk without success.
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